The most valuable feedback that I received on my Weekends post was by Gabriela Mendoza, she stated she got a good sense of how I was influenced and because of that now I want to study mechanical engineering which is what I wanted the readers to capture. My childhood memory about seeing my dad repair and exchange the oil to our car, as well as seeing the parts under the hood sparked a interest in me which made me get into the concept of cars and of course mechanical engineering. Gabriela mentioned my Weekends post was overall good and easy to understand, this feedback matters to me because it lets me know my writing is good and thorough.
The most valuable feedback that I gave was to Gitzel Rodriguez, I mentioned I was glad she was trying to learn sign language, because there's often occasions where deaf kids and adults try to communicate but a lot of us don't know sign language so its difficult for them to get their message through. I tried once to learn a new language to talk to my friends, I tried to learn Arabic,but it was too difficult so I had stopped.
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